Week 9

As I was walking though the industry I saw something odd. It was like red jello it looked really cool the scientist said that if the jello escaped we would have to evacuate. but that will never happen because it was in his cage. Then the scientist got an urgent call one of the other scientists had just gone down they say that because he was so afraid. Then he said we shall move on. So we went out side and ate our lunch. Then we went back in side to see more stuff. Now we have to two classes.

2 thoughts on “Week 9

  1. Isaiah,
    You have done a good job incorporating the focus words for this week’s challenge. Your simile including jello gave me a good picture of the consistency of the unknown, but powerful substance in the industry.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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