Week 25

Me and my brother were playing baseball out side. I was throwing and he was batting. When I threw the ball he missed it and it hit the window and shattered it. My mom came out to investigate. When she came out she looked mad. She said why are you playing ball I told you two clean your room. Then I said we were taking a break. She said why were you throwing so close to the house. I told her but I didn’t mean to hit it that hard. My mom told us we were gonna have to pay.

3 thoughts on “Week 25

  1. Dear Isaiah.
    stellar job! very original piece. If I were explaining that story, your piece of writing is exactly how I would have phrased it. you might have to practice your punctuation and spelling, but otherwise, spectacular. I really enjoyed how you went with something original, and if you would like to read my response, you will find it at this link. https://kayla56mps.edublogs.org/2022/03/18/golden-consequences/ thanks for sharing your writing, and I hope to see your comment on my post.

    from Kayla.

  2. Isaiah,
    The narrator seems to have an aswer for everything. I think they are lucky the mom did not have a stronger reaction. Paying for the damage seems reasonable. Good planning to make your story flow sensibly. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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