It was the first day of fall and I was waiting for my taxi. When the taxi came I say that it was more yellow then some of the Other ones I had ridden in. I was really exited for the trip ahead of me. When we arrived at the destination I saw a really beautiful waterfall. When I saw my dad I started to breath heavily. He had just gotten back from Pakistan. He was in the United States Army. I Hadn’t seen him in three years. It was really cool to se my dad again.
The amazing end
Hi Isaiah, I liked your story this week because of your use of the prompt! Keep it up! -Eden
Hello Isaiah,
I can see you were able to use all five prompt words effectively in your story sharing the experience of having a family member in the U.S. Army, especially when they’ve been stationed overseas. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia